Wednesday, March 10, 2010

Poem: 'Fred and I in '54'

Many Happy Returns of the Day!

Happy Birthday Fred!

Today is Freddie’s Birthday! Freddie is my younger brother in the U.K. He lives in Peterborough. The closest I got to my brother as a boy, was in the summer holidays in 1954. We were both borders in the Boys’ High School, Allahabad.

The school routine, dormitory chores, study classes, assemblies, long school hours, compulsory games in the evening and finally study classes again before dinner, kept us apart and we saw very little of each other.

The Summer Holidays, a long two months, May and June, brought us wholly together for the one and only time in our boyhood.

A Rudyard Kipling-like atmosphere prevails, specially reminding us of Kim and his adventures.

I’ll sign off as,

Yours truly,
M.A.

P.S.: “M.A.”, is what Freddie would affectionately call me in those days. This poem titled, “Fred and I in ’54”, is dedicated to him.

Fred and I in ’54

How do I remember

A summer long gone by
With younger brother Fred?
Younger than I am now,
And younger than I was then,
In the Summer of 1954.

He couldn’t paint,
I couldn’t maths.
I was older & stronger,
Strong & bolder was Fred;
One and a half years younger,
In the Summer of ’54.

Separated by the system
In a boarding school,
Times shared were sparse and spaced with rules;
Big brothers had to be distant
From younger ones. Holidays. Then came
The Summer of ’54.

United once again; again at home
In scorching Allahabad.
Fred in shorts, sweating,
With glowing skin, and I
Without a vest, climb to the top
To view a brood in nest; that Summer of ’54!

Beneath a culvert
Ran a stream. Tall grass
Took vantage of the cool & wet.
Between the stems a mongoose
Ran; we knew him well
And watched him long – that Summer ’54.

Hot winds raced us to
The trees and bushes; on
Our knees, to dig out Earthworms for our hooks.
O, Kim could have not been more
Pleased to touch the earth,
That Summer ’54.

Hoopoes, falcons, doves and kites,
Sparrow hawk and barbet
Crow and fowl and pigeons too,
Young pariah dog
On corded leash,
Moved through the balmy Summer heat of ’54.

Beneath the chil-bil tree,
A mango shared by two;
I lick the drip cascading
Down my arm. And Freddie
Too, with self same charm
Saw mangoes through that Summer of ’54.

A kite he made, with paper thick,
Some glue, a stick and twine.
With twinkle eye he cast it high
And stretched it to the moon.
I stood close by, and envied sly
The flyer of Summer ’54.

With stealthy poise, on brother’s arm,
We move in silent strides
Towards the hole where
Local cobra hid. “Don’t tap
the ground, M. A., for he can tell
That we are near” – that Summer ’54!

This garden Opera House
Was still & quiet sometimes;
And often loud and clear
With bird and childish cries.
Was there a doubt that secrets
Lie, in shadowed coves, of Summer heights, in ’54?

The monsoons came with toads,
And `hoppers too. Lal-boochies, dragonflies
And other creepy crawly things.
But sparkling jars our captives held
And caterpillars made to tell
How Summer moths were born in ’54.

The culvert, hopping filled
With frogs, and line in hand,
We caught a few while
Freddie caught a chill
With icy raindrops on his back,
Raw with prickly heat, in the Summer of ’54.

The years gone by
And frogs no more,
And rain that comes in drips,
Of warming weathers
And treeless ’scapes
We miss that Summer of ’54.

The outdoors made a Scout of me,
And Nature close to him
Made tackling life
A smile with strife,
And golden days a charm
To dangle on a moment there in Summer ’54.

This joyous summer knows no end
’Spite separated years! Life had
It’s streams to cross, and hillocks too;
It’s bushes and it’s banks.
Stiff climbs we saw: mirrored,
In our Summer of 1954.


End of Poem.



Look forward to a paraphrase and notes on the above poem. Illustrations in watercolours will follow too.

3 comments:

  1. Hi Uncle Maurice,

    This is an amazing poem that you dedicated to my Dad...whilst readin & watching the video, he was smiling & reminiscing... thankyou for this lovely gift for him...with love...John

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  2. My Dear John,
    I knew that your Dad would love this nostalgic reminder of a beautiful moment in the lives of two young boys. I know that these two boys will be forever bound by those memories and incidents expressed in poetry in, "Fred and I in '54".
    Very lovingly,
    Uncle Maurice.

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  3. I loved your poem, "Fred and I in '54". It created beautiful visual images for me of 2 brothers sharing a summer that only the young can know. Very nice writing Maurice. Elder Tanner

    PS Who is the old guy in the video?

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